Hi Cooper, I enjoyed reading your thoughts about the borders and why they should be closed. When we write pesuasive writing, remember the hamburger model. It has an introduction (top bun) 3 main ingredients (reasons why) and explain your reasons (which you have done :) ) and a conclusion re stating the main ideas (Bottom bun).
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Hi Cooper,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your thoughts about the borders and why they should be closed. When we write pesuasive writing, remember the hamburger model. It has an introduction (top bun) 3 main ingredients (reasons why) and explain your reasons (which you have done :) ) and a conclusion re stating the main ideas (Bottom bun).
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